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Memory, dear memory, how do I explain?
Your eyes and your smile, oh it's all the same.
In sorrow and pity, I must have to say,
My lies in disguise are revealed today.

Since my first breath you've been in my dreams,
Slicing through air-waves and pulling at seams.
For years now, my friend, I've been molding this mind,
And now the word victim has been redefined.

Never forget the past that you breathe,
And remember the times of just you and me.
Because all the while inside your fears,
You'll always remember the former years.
The past we had when we were together,
Together forever, no matter the weather.

Now in this town that I exist in with fear,
I sit in the grass and hope you are near.
The pain of the past that conducts all these tears,
I wipe them away and wish you were here.
:iconseptemberbreeze:

Author's Comments

:hug:
Took a lot to write this, I hope you like it.
It feels good to write some poetry again.

Comments


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:iconlostcharlee:
It's very wonderful, I love how this seems to create some sort of tune in head. What a lovely flow

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Raise your glass high for tomorrow we die
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank you! :D
I appreciate it.
:iconbackuppanic:
Wow, just . . . wow.

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If God isn't dead, then I'll kill him myself.
:iconlunawolf445:
Amazing. Simply, amazing. ^^

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Strangers stab you in the heart, friends stab you in the back. But best friends stab you with little bendy straws. XD
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Yea, Im a loser. But the coolest loser you'll ever see!
:iconlunawolf445:
No problem. ^^ :giggle:

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Strangers stab you in the heart, friends stab you in the back. But best friends stab you with little bendy straws. XD
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Yea, Im a loser. But the coolest loser you'll ever see!
:iconvolcanic-queen:
That's a beautiful poem!
:iconliorart:
It feels really musical. You need to write more poems. <3

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The above post was just an attempt to get you to click my name and look at my gallery. :D

But seriously, take a peek. I love serious critiquing and I feed off it, 'cause it makes me better.
:iconsubstitutesadist:
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I cannot tell you how in love with this I am.
It makes me think of some one, and it makes me think of me. It's positively beautiful.


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"I’m not a writer—I just have an unhealthy obsession with words."

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