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Frail Wings of Infinty by ~SeptemberBreeze:iconSeptemberBreeze:



     I fall onto the grass, being in an abnormal state attributed to an excess of black bile and characterized by irascibility or depression. My lungs press into my rib cage, clicking and snapping as a mechanism or teeth coming together. An impending pain waits in the pit of my stomach, waiting eagerly to rip me apart.
   
  "I can't go back," I heave out, "Not back home." I stand up again and moving, rolling, or progressing from nothing other than momentum. Sirens ring from a distance, soundwaves chasing me through the air.
    
     Slow. Everything is going slow. Traces of objects last in the atmosphere, causing me to have a sensation of whirling. not at all helping my tendency of falling. I slam into the ground like a dead-weighted object, but I immediately spring back from the surface in a lively manner. Wings spread out of my back, radiating, admitting, and reflecting little light which hides me in the midnight gloom.
     I float into the air, looking down at the rusted, dead ground. My black wings spread out larger and I start to morph chemically and mentally into something that iniquitous creatures would fear.

     Novelty memories rest in the damp air, only to last as a paperback book of poetry. Zeppelins rain upon me as I watch the world devour in it's pain.

     In all the pain.
:iconseptemberbreeze:

Author's Comments

I finally wrote something.

Listening to: The End is the Beginning is the End by Smashing Pumpkins

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:iconsilverstride:
It's beautifully sorrowful, Jude.
Magnificent work.


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:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank you so entirely too much.
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:iconhillbillygirl:
This is absolutely beautiful. It is so full of emotions of hurt, feat and pain that it makes me want to hug all the pain you feel away. I am so sorry that you feel this way. The ending can go two ways for me, one of death and the other is of getting strength and hope so that the person overcame the pain they felt. This is truly beautiful. I am so happy that you have posted this. What a way to come back to us.
:icondaneed6:
omg;
i love you xD

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Look, its a dragpn
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rawwwwwwwwwr*
:iconthefoxastronaut:
This is one of your most beautiful pieces. It's wonderful. I can feel the emotion.

Sorry if I'm coming off as a stalker or something. :D

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I want to scream andshout and scribble curse words on the walls.
:icondarkcobra-sk:
Beautiful and filled with emotion. Very deep and filled with sorrow. You are always able to make the reader feel the emotions that run through your work and even yourself.

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"You are here, alone again. In your sweet insanity. All too calm, you hide yourself from reality.
Do you call it solitude? Do you call it liberty? When all the world turns away to leave you lonely."

-Yuki Kajiura, "The World"
:iconpoemsandpebbles:
beautiful as always, thank you for sharing.

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You laugh until you cry, and you cry until you laugh, and everyone must breathe until their final breath....

-Regina Spektor, "On the Radio" (It's a good song, listen to it.)
:iconangelofmisery59:
magnificent, a bit depressing but still great
:iconb00kah0lic:
Amazing work. A real delight to read. =D
:iconbackuppanic:
I float into the air, looking down at the rusted, dead ground.

There's just something about that line, I simply can't help but love it.

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If God isn't dead, then I'll kill him myself.

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