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     She's got poetry in her eyes, conflagrant and stunning in so many manners. Resplendent daydreams spill from her mouth, aesthetically winding into the air and shaping my lips into a radiant beam. Her benevolent thoughts and fathomless words, I cannot repeat, I will not repeat.
     Our heartbeats of felicity echo throughout the room as we intertwine our fingers and breathe life into each other's soul. With a step and a stammer and a genuine smile, we reinvented the art of love. The intricate emotions shine bright through my pale skin, propelling me into a state of obscurity and perplexity, and glimpses of forgotten times develop before my weary eyes.
     The skies bleed tears of fire onto the sodium streetlights and the passing headlights. We remain silent in the progressing vehicle, admiring the phenomenon that gravitates to our solemn streets. Her reflection in the window displays wide, illuminated eyes that seem so gentle and composed.
     The fragments of fallen stars cling to our shoes as we slip out of the car and walk down this road of infinity. And although we've reached the end of this melancholy world, it's peaceful knowing that we truly are more than just fingertips and candlewicks.
     We are forever, and we are always.
:iconseptemberbreeze:

Author's Comments

I put the past into the ground
I saw the future as a cloud
If there's still time to turn around
I'm going to

Its just one day I fell asleep
And all day all night I dreamed
I am the first one I deceive
If I can make myself believe
The rest is easy…

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:iconromanorumcamena:
This is beautiful, and I love it. I have no words for how it's touched me, I can only thank you for it; I'm so grateful to you for producing this masterpiece :hug:

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:iconbalancingartist:
I love "She's got poetry in her eyes".

It's a great opener to this.

Absolutely fabulous. (:
:iconthisemptyblissx3:
more than just fingertips and candlewicks.

amazing ♥


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i memorized all the words for you. if you only knew, how much that's just not like me.
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chorus romance says g o o d n i g h t .
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank you, so very very much.
This one was really hard to write for me. I couldn't get the words the way I wanted it. I wanted it all to sound perfect. And for some reason, I have a closer attachment to this particular piece than the others.

I just don't know why...
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank you, your words are uplifting. :)
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank you so very much. :hug:
:iconromanorumcamena:
I just notice a great writer when I see one, and someone whose passionate about what they do :heart:

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:iconbalancingartist:
I know what you mean. I find myself getting more attached to pieces more than others, especially when I find that I've poured myself into it. (:
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank goodness somebody can relate. :P

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