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Sorrowful Sunday,
I'm not a victim, I victimize,
And you can't drown me with your media lies.
Even though you stick a needle in my skin,
You won't give me cancer, not again.

Mannequin Monday,
You are the host to my early-week parasite,
You snap my wings, and I fight for flight.
Holding me hostage, binded in words,
My eyes are straining in all the absurd.

Temptress Tuesday,
Stock me up on medicine,
You can't wait to twist my hands again.
You send me hate mail in heart attacks,
And the doctors can't even face these facts.

Wicked Wednesday,
You lurk along in my least favorite songs,
And inbetween my breaths, you paint my lungs.
You swim in my veins, you swim in my eyes,
You fill my inner-ribbons with poisonous lies.

Thallium Thursday,
Painting nightmare portraits all inside my brain,
You sicken me with stories that make me go insane.
Offering me presents that are obviously bombs,
And putting me to sleep with sad blue-grass songs.

Facade Friday,
You brutaly torture me with twisted glares,
And I rebel in weakness with ice-blue stares.
You portray yourself as a man with a dream,
And then brain-wash the city and kill the whole scene.

Sadistic Saturday,
Ink in my skin and lead in my nails,
This attempt to break me never fails.
Floating somewhere in all the crooked hearts,
The end of the week is only the start.
©2008-2009 ~SeptemberBreeze
:iconseptemberbreeze:

Author's Comments

I wrote this late, late at night.
I really hope you like it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Word Count: 238

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:iconpixxy-dust-fades:
I love this piece it is brilliant

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*sprinkles pixxy dust*
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank you too much :D!
I'm glad you like it.
:iconpirateoforange:
Wow, that's intresting.

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I can only blame myself, you can only blame me...

And I could write a song a hundred miles long, well that's where I belong and you belong with me...
:iconxoshushuxo:
wow, nice job! :glomp:

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"I would face any horror and overcome my darkest fears just to hear your voice before i go to sleep..."

"Control your fate, colour your dreams"

~silverstitch
:iconbluemeadow193:
Wow! I love this piece! It is so great! I usually write many of my pieces late at night, they always seem to come out best that way.
:iconobjectiveexpression:
I liked it. It was really clever, expecially the end.

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"Speak for yourself."
"You think I'd speak for you? I don't even know your language."
:iconemmie-lynne:
Very smooth. I like this a lot. One sp correction "lead" in my nails instead of led. Great job :D

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You are your own limiting factor, don't hesitate, create!
:iconrobinclone:
Amazing piece of work. :blackrose:

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“You can’t tell other people how to feel, you just can’t. Someone will cry; that’s fine. Others may choose to laugh, and guess what? That’s okay too. Plus, you don’t know what’s going on inside people’s heads.”
-Dr. Cox-

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