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Shadow Boy and Dream Girl by ~SeptemberBreeze:iconSeptemberBreeze:



The boy with black wings flies high above,
Searching for someone to call his true love.
His hands slice gracefully through the air,
His heart beats quickly without a care.

The girl with brown eyes sits below on the ground,
Feeding the birds and not making a sound.
Her eyes blink slowly as if holding in words,
Hateful sentences that are nothing but absurd.

The boy sees her sorrow and soars to below,
He lands by her side and whispers a hello.
Her masterpiece smile sends him into tears,
And she holds him tightly to get rid of her fears.

He grabs her shaking hands and looks into her eyes,
Telling her stories of the beauty of the sky.
He pulls her closely and jumps up towards the sun,
Flying to the place where her life had begun.

Forever together in a world so afar,
The boy who's an angel and the girl that's a star.
©2008-2009 ~SeptemberBreeze
:iconseptemberbreeze:

Author's Comments

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=Xmoe-moeX
I'll always be here to get rid of the fears.

Word Count: 139

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:iconh4m15h:
Another exellent piece from your catalogue of friends and fools. (Poetic license allows a better name, I'm sure there are no fools in your catalogue of friends.) An exellent piece with a final line that draws your individual fusion of freeform and rhym into the spotlight with words worthy of some of the better writers of out time.

I'm starting a collection called 'Friends and Fools' for this catalogue.

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I couldn't be bothered making a signature so I made a signature saying............ wait a minute.
:iconseptemberbreeze:
Thank you so, too much.
I really appreciate it.
:iconballoonplz:
:icongray-shadow:
Magnificent peace. It's almost as if you looked into my dreams. The first two paragraphs were very captivating. Great work. =)
:icondarkcobra-sk:
Beautiful! I love it, it is yet again another masterpiece made by an amazing writer. ^_^

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"You are here, alone again. In your sweet insanity. All too calm, you hide yourself from reality.
Do you call it solitude? Do you call it liberty? When all the world turns away to leave you lonely."

-Yuki Kajiura, "The World"
:icondarkbell:
That's beautiful!

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"I smell Chestnut Flowers."
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:iconxoshushuxo:
this is so sweet and beautiful.
i only wish that it could actually happen..
i love it :heart:

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"I would face any horror and overcome my darkest fears just to hear your voice before i go to sleep..."

"Control your fate, colour your dreams"

~silverstitch
:icondevilie:
Very operatic! You can feel the two getting closer. Very expressive, I love it

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"Believe with all your heart, and all your wishes will come true"

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